a lonely lune

The winds can whisper.

Waves can roar.

My soul’s still alone.

This is my response to Day One of NaPoWriMo 2016, where we’re challenged to write a lune.

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8 thoughts on “a lonely lune”

Beautiful, simply beautiful.

inktuition on 02/04/2016 at 9:00 pm said:

Thank you. Your comment brought a tear to my eye.

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Oh I really like this one. Nice job with the start of NaPoWriMo this year!

inktuition on 02/04/2016 at 9:00 pm said:

Thank you. Hope it’s a good year for you, too. Happy writing!

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Powerful and effective contrast here between the sound of the winds and the waves and the silence that comes with being alone!

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8 thoughts on “a lonely lune”