The winds can whisper.
Waves can roar.
My soul’s still alone.
This is my response to Day One of NaPoWriMo 2016, where we’re challenged to write a lune.
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writing my life and soul
The winds can whisper.
Waves can roar.
My soul’s still alone.
This is my response to Day One of NaPoWriMo 2016, where we’re challenged to write a lune.
Beautiful, simply beautiful.
Thank you. Your comment brought a tear to my eye.
Oh I really like this one. Nice job with the start of NaPoWriMo this year!
Thank you. Hope it’s a good year for you, too. Happy writing!
Powerful and effective contrast here between the sound of the winds and the waves and the silence that comes with being alone!
Thank you for getting me and my poem. Happy writing!
It was lovely, so thank YOU 🙂
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