a lonely lune

Posted on 01/04/2016 by inktuition

The winds can whisper.

Waves can roar.

My soul’s still alone.

This is my response to Day One of NaPoWriMo 2016, where we’re challenged to write a lune.

8 thoughts on “a lonely lune”

CC Champagne on 01/04/2016 at 6:42 pm said:

Beautiful, simply beautiful.

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- inktuition on 02/04/2016 at 9:00 pm said:
  
  Thank you. Your comment brought a tear to my eye.
  
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Kiana Donae on 02/04/2016 at 2:34 am said:

Oh I really like this one. Nice job with the start of NaPoWriMo this year!

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- inktuition on 02/04/2016 at 9:00 pm said:
  
  Thank you. Hope it’s a good year for you, too. Happy writing!
  
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C.C. on 03/04/2016 at 7:00 pm said:

Powerful and effective contrast here between the sound of the winds and the waves and the silence that comes with being alone!

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- inktuition on 03/04/2016 at 8:57 pm said:
  
  Thank you for getting me and my poem. Happy writing!
  
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  - C.C. on 05/04/2016 at 2:27 am said:
    
    It was lovely, so thank YOU 🙂
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